Leja

It has to be 'til! How would you get the second "l" in til out of "until"? Besides, the question isn't really 'til vs. till, it's until vs. untill. Untill ...

This reminded me a lot of Poe's Anabell Lee ^_^ It had the same kind of sad inevitability to it, and inverted repetition and rhythm. It was cool. I was ...

First, as to your questions ^_^ Yes, holey is a word, meaning that something is full of holes, as you said. Though, even if it wasn't a word, you used ...

I love reading what you write, Sam. Enough said ^_^ Part One: I like how we're just thrown right into the story and it's so chock-full of images. It's very ...

It has been a dreadful night. The images floated back into her mind. The Lunar Cast brought the joy of harvest. But along with it, The Night Creature. No man ...

Hey RandomGrrl! (sorry it took me so long to get to this!) I must say, I had a hard time getting into the story. It began with a lot of ...

Ciao, OE! I'd forgotten that I'd commented already, lol. But I think you've changed it since then? You have a few different images: lies slip, truth tastes, lies pile, there's ...

I really like the first two lines; they just fit together so well. Additionally, this just became my favourite example of a rhyming poem ^_^ We're living on remains of ...

Hi Nolan; welcome to YWS! This poem covers a rather tricky subject. Because of the subject matter, I've bumped the rating to PG-13. Now, let's look at a few things ...

Ooh, I heard about this! However, organisations need to be very careful when declaring sweeping ways to reduce or eliminate dependency on oil. A while back, ethanol was being hailed ...

Banned for having all five blue stars!

I don't keep tabs enough on the different teams to really say a whole lot about them, but I must add that I looove these kinds of tournaments; it's the ...

Melody Lowe took a bite from her chocolate bar, looked out of her car window and, to her dismay, saw very little. There were a few scraggly trees, several shrubs ...

First of all, 3-Damentional, thank you for properly rating this ^_^ Yes, it's especially crass, but you're also right; given the ending, it works with the poem. And that is ...

Okay; I'll try to get to it before the weekend's out; when I have time to sit and read it all at once! ^_^