Leja

I can't find anywhere a definition for ratings, though I think I've seen one. EDIT: Never mind, I found it at the bottom of a Rules/ Before You Post sticky. ...

*is not longer confused* :D

“You will do whatever she asks of you, even if I have to send two guards in here and force you to comply.” This doesn't sound very threatening. Only two ...

Just to spark discussion, it seems like it might be demeaning for Sabah to want Erik in the first place, though maybe less so if she isn't that public about ...

Erik’s eyes lingered on her face for a moment. His servant was a very gentle, incredibly quiet girl, but he had to admit he enjoyed her company. He had never ...

Here's the breathe/breath thing: I still can’t breath . This has happened to me so many times but I still can’t breath . He shushes me, and looks like he ...

I feel I must caution you on name choice. I find it easier to mix unusual names you can pronounce with maybe the one odd one that's a little more ...

It was nice in that it was straightforward. I felt like I was in the room with you, but the way things were presented, I felt like I could feel ...

I actually didn't think it was too too short. But maybe I just have a short attention span :laughs: I think it's a good length for a chapter read on ...

I don't see any problem with it. I'm gonna make a way-out-there analogy [that probably won't hold up in the long run]: Say there is a guy and a girl ...

yes, I did mean American Sign Language. I was just wondering because they're different culturally.

He'd been sentenced for murdering two women. He did not deny committing the crime, nor did he feel any remorse for his acts. He had simply become angry, so angry ...

Impatiently winding a strand of polished midnight hair around her ringed finger, Sabah sighed loudly and reclined dramatically on her daybed that was piled high with generous silks and pillows. ...

Well, anything involving that actor makes me furious, so I'll second your crazy laugh!

Oh my goodness, it was a complete massacre of the books and, at times, the general storyline. They're writing themselves into a corner, in my opinion. The way Hermione is ...