Leja

Well, red and yellow are happy colours, so I like it. Other than that, no comment :wink: 7/10

--- Version 5 --- At the mountain's peak, my knees hold fast when the ground splits and the wind files by (since I am aerodynamic) to extend the edges of ...

Could someone clearly define the differences between all the poetry categories? I'm lost as to which one is for what.

1) How much do you read? The whole thing? A few articles? The announcements? I read everything, cover to cover! 2) Do you try out any of the games on ...

JC, you look exactly like a friend of mine. Execpt she lives in Spain, and doesn't have the same handle on the English language as you do. So I highly ...

This is very straightforward; there's not anything more to it than what it is. I feel like it's addressed to someone and I'm just watching on the sidelines, when I ...

I think you should hold off with the commas at the end of every line; they're distracting and often unnecessary. I also think it would be lovely were you to ...

While I love musical imagery, I think you lean a little too heavily on it to avoid describing anything other than auditorily. Though, this only really occurs in the first ...

It's very... conversational. It almost seems informal, but maybe I just haven't read such a style for a while [sorry, I didn't intend to rhyme]. I usually associate that style ...

*does not argue* :D

Lovely beginning; I felt like I was personally being told a story. shoulders’ slope showed smiles that come hard fade harder, like forcing beauty into stones. A few points, few ...

Your imagery is vague and disjointed. "This pain was not for me", is stated in the second stanza, but the idea of pain it relates to was touched on less ...

I'm going forward in slow motion, turning my tears inot anger so that they do not come spilling over my lashes. Whoops, you're kinda contradicting yourself here; I think you ...

Uh-oh, I don't get it :( you lost me at the smoke and the silver. I think I understand the emotions behind it, but I don't understand what I'm reading ...

Wonderful. It was simple, and the simplicity of it just made this poem that much more appealing. I thought this part was ambiguous: Crash. Boom. Bang. I wasn't sure what ...