Leja

I think that if there are elements that make you say "that's perfect for my story" then go ahead and use them. I'd think people would be flattered to have ...

First and foremost, this story could greatly benefit from spacing between paragraphs. This makes it easier and more pleasant to read. Although she felt rather lonely in the emptiness of ...

Hmm, there was talk of goddesses, but no mention of the siren logo. The "All hail..." was too repetitive. In fact, you more ro less repeat alot of your ideas, ...

This was unfortunately well-written. Because of that, I did read the whole thing. Unfortunate because it was so disturbing. But then again, I'm sure you know all of the above. ...

Which is kind of strange. You'd think underage posession would be the offence. Cook two pans on one stove, so to speak.

Quarks are what make up the subatomic particles protons, neutrons, and [I believe] electrons, like protons/neutrons/electrons make up atoms. I think "Five Chairs, One Empty" fits better and makes more

I listen to the classical music station on the radio. I was trained to think of a story for the songs I listen to [my flute teacher is mad at ...

Right now, it's anything and everything. Within a five hour range of my hometown, that is

^ I'm still terrified of the German death metal. Oh boy. My musical collection is currently undergoing a semi-major genre shift. I'm liking Jazz more and more, and the classic ...

Thanks for the advice, Adam. I'm hoping to take enough college credits senior year that I get many of my first year courses out of the way. *walks wayyy around ...

-sorry for a double post- So I now have in my hands "Scrapped Princess" by Ichio Sakaki [er, that's who wrote the story, anyway] on recommendation from the good people ...

As I assume that this is indeed a product of boredom, is it wrong to hope that you're bored more often? ^_^

I have this odd nervous habit of naming my nails after the wives of Henry the Eighth- you know, Aragon, Boleyn, Parr…and then, I rip them off, one by one, ...

and she fell for it, easier than I’d ever dared to dream that she would ^ The end of this was worded strangely. Maybe nix the "that"? Clandestine meetings between ...

answer: yes. But only if it's stupid. rating: 7/10 acabadababidilybidilyboo