Leja

The first one is cute, but it made me kind of mad because the first two stanzas were such a great set up, and the third stanza (mostly the last ...

I think this poem might benefit from longer lines. For example, something like "High above trees I may rise / Or a small sapling may be my size". Right now, ...

Given the title, I immediately think of the Kate Chopin book. I have never read it (yet!) though, so if there's some link between the two, it's been lost on ...

Woo you, somehow Live up to your stupid tattoo ^ LOVE the internal rhyme here! I think I liked it so much because in this poetic moment, a few different ...

Aww, this was sweet =) There's not much going on here in the way of formal technique, but who's to say that's always a bad thing? I'm just pointing it ...

I think the best advice for screenwriting is to read screenplays! The formatting is fairly easy to pick up on (and programs like Celtx, which is awesome by the way, ...

Eh, I was with you up until you started talking about bowel movements. Then... not so much, haha. On a technical level, I like the way you followed words down ...

To be perfectly honest, the first line pulled me in. Not because it had anything to do with me, but because it immediately gave me an image and a connection ...

Believe me, I wish I could like short stories (either writing or reading them). But they always seem so contrived and pointless to me. So I actually hope that the ...

Ooh, this is a dangerous can of worms, haha. I will probably be spelling a lot of these wrong and/or omitting the authors because honestly, I really don't care enough ...

You are brave indeed, my friend! Personally, I know that I need an extremely detailed outline to even attempt something like this. But that's just me. Some people can sit ...

The short answer is that it's up to you! :D Some stories start off in medias res (literally "in the middle of things), in which case an MC leaving for ...

I really like how you're visualizing the stage at the beginning of this scene (the yell of "WITCH!" crossing over from the living room to the girls at the mall)! ...

My main concern for this scene is that I'm having trouble suspending disbelief. How old are the characters? Do they all live together? If not, it sort of sounds like ...

I second Pablo Neruda! Also, I think Harlem Renaissance poetry is great.