Leja

Mwahaha! I've dug up something from the dregs of my portfolio ^.^ with the aim of making it more poetic. Is it getting better?

Of Sanity; Insanity’s slave, That clung to Earth’s craggy surface. Tortu r ously tearing through my mind, I'm not sure whether you or the earth are being metaphored (yes, probably ...

Oh boy. Now I'll have to try this. But my family still won't forgive me for making pizza into grilled cheese, so any attempts must remain covert :D

I thought that the rhyming was funny. The general ~storyline didn't say too much; presumably the person it's written about has a foul temper and just walks away when something ...

Here's a website that might be of help: And a link within that website: :grr: The whole line above, even the part in parentheses, should be part of the link ...

The second would be a good setting for an I Spy book ^.^

First of all, where's the monitor for the computer in the second picture? There's a keyboard and speakers, but no computer :D I think they'd both look cool if you ...

I'm assuming he's coming into town for the first time? Maybe you could expand on the stuff he's carrying with him?

I always vote for finding the extraordinary in the ordinary. Take someone making breakfast, for example. If they can't reach the top shelf, you'll know that they're short. If they ...

As far as I know, there's no decided rule that you can't work on two things at once. You could put this at the back of your notebook until you ...

I thought the repetition of the "Tell me..." and phrasing it all with a question got to be a little much. Maybe you could try rephrasing some as non-questions and ...

Matt: Spain is a mad cool country; have fun! Kitty: have fun on holiday!

It went in a lot of different directions. You have pollution, chess stuff, drowning/water, and tattoo images, but they don't seem to really connect, and it's stronger if they do. ...

7/10 It took me maybe a week to notice that there were two people in the picture. Then I thought that the girls hand was a hairdryer. XD In case ...

Fun blog; quotes linking French and military are always funny [type "french military victories" into Google and hit the "I'm Feeling Lucky" button]. 8/10