Leja

I like the old style of posting work, where it's in a nice neat forum box and all. It's less distracting. It's also easier to read because the background isn't ...

Just picking up The Sun Also Rises by Hemingway.

Currently reading: The Post Birthday World by Lionel Shriver. The beginning was alright, but there's something trudging when the parallel universe splits off. Should be reading: Moby Dick :blegh:

5/10 Maybe I don't get it

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I don't do diaries. I think they're yucky. I don't like remembering. Writing wise, graph paper is the absolute best. There's something very structurally sound about it. I have a ...

Aw man; all these cool new choices after I vote :D

zoh my goodness. *shudder* Skydiving from ~normal altitudes would paralyze me. I can't imagine he'd live after something like that? [though according to the article he should] His parachute will ...

Freeze dried ice cream gets sunk at the bottom of the ocean: it's disgusting. (1) Life raft so's ya don't freeze to death (2) Water. Because it's not only yummy, ...

Like woah; what is this place? *pokes and runs away* NOTE: score with the settings menu :D

About critiquing: maybe some way you can figuratively scribble in the margins of a story then post just your notes? That's what I'd do if it were printed. Though I ...

I'd advocate for punctuation not just at the end of the sentence, but in the middle too. This gives it a sense of tone, like when you speak, how you ...

This presented itself more as a list than a poem. And a long list at that. I see Snoink suggested a short story? It might also work as a script. ...

In all, I found it rather disjointed, as if you came up with a bunch of phrases and listed them. Except for the end of the poem, beginning at "Bend ...

You really needn't call attention to the fact that this is an acrostic poem. I'd get rid of the bold letters and probably make at least some of them lowercased ...