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Re: Check, Mate
--- A script for a radio drama. Well, this shall be interesting... --- -Theme Song- 1.1: Sidewalk -Intro Music- Change jingles, the taxi cab’s door clicks, taxi speeds off. NORA, ...
Aug 21, 2007 -
Re: Flash Foward Parts 1 & 2 (revised)
I think that the first sentence introduced the story very nicely. A lot of telling occurs in the first bit, and it comes off as a sort of info dump. ...
Aug 21, 2007 -
Re: 500 Words
The repetition bugged be after a while. So many of the sentences begin with "Enough words to..." which is fine for emphasis for a little bit, but then it continued... ...
Aug 21, 2007 -
Re: Geezer's Property (Part 4 Up)
PART ONE “Come on, Leah, you know that that’s just something our moms told us to keep us quiet when we went to the beach.” There’s something about the “you ...
Aug 21, 2007 -
Re: Sketch of my hand
The thumb doesn't have a knuckle; it looks like it's bending at an awkward angle. I like the shading; maybe if you feathered it a little farther into the rest ...
Aug 20, 2007 -
Re: What are you reading at the moment?
Moby Dick >blegh
Aug 20, 2007 -
Re: Lord of The Rings or Harry Potter?
Harry Potter is like comfort food that's always kinda around. I started LOTR, but then had to put it down for a little. I should pick it up again, as ...
Aug 20, 2007 -
Re: Rate avatars!!!!
semi-frightening... but interesting? Nope, don't want to know ^.^ 7/10
Aug 19, 2007 -
Re: Hunter goes through the wall
That looks amazingly fun, actually. Love the title, btw.
Aug 19, 2007 -
Re: What Broswer Is The Best?
Guess who won the battle for FireFox? (hint: me) It's pretty cool; I like it better than IE.
Aug 19, 2007 -
Re: Writing in Spanish...
Me encanta el español, y quiero leer el fanfic!
Aug 19, 2007 -
Re: Help me create a horribly cliched romance scene!
Yes, there must be rain. Maybe you can throw in the part where they run across the room/beach/road to each other in slow motion.
Aug 19, 2007 -
Re: Hands on Shoulders
ASL gloves: click on G under "Main Dictionary" and scroll down to gloves. Thanks all!
Aug 18, 2007 -
Re: What Would Make YWS Easier To Use?
(:high fives Phorcys:) I've always had trouble in threads with lots of pages in them. There'll be the first four pages or so numbered at the bottom, then an ellipsis, ...
Aug 18, 2007 -
Re: Your Boat Is Sinking And You Have Thirty Seconds To Evacuate
That is amazingly cool [except for the dying part]!
Aug 18, 2007
