Leja

I absolutely love the ocean around her, first off! The pink hair over her right shoulder seems especially shiny, and as such, seemed a little random. Her left eyebrow, as ...

G’day, Kel ^_^ this is the story of which we were talking plot points, no? Part One I don’t like how the first three sentences began with nouns; I’d consider ...

I think it's easier to stop yourself from constantly editing if you write in pen. Like my art teacher had an exercise where we'd sketch in sharpies instead of pencil ...

Thanks, Wiggy! And I shall be sure to look for that book.

t was basically a reversed-role sleeping beauty with Herman Melville's Billy Budd as the main character, set in the Renaissance on crack, Love the description ^_^

Chapter One I was nervous at first when I saw a complicated first name as the very first word, but I found it very easy to continue reading, so I ...

If you're still offering, I'd most appreciate it if you could look at my audio drama: and of course I'd be happy to return the favor if you ever find ...

Connie: Sense and Sensibility? That's nothing! Melia just read Wuthering Heights; can't go anywhere near Bao now or he'll try to convince everyone I've killed him. Bao: Don't be stupid, ...

This question was sparked by me not wanting to have a page full of indented lines for the lots of dialogue (yes, that's an exaggeration). But Rhea, I was referring ...

Many people edit changes right into the original. If it's very, very, drastically different, sometimes they put up a new thread (but I wouldn't recommend it as it can create ...

Lines of nobility splintered like knives into my skindepths, misting my perception: ^ I really liked these lines a hero fall white and wordless. I wanted to stick an apostrophe ...

In that case, I'd still suggest getting rid of the repetition and in general the format-wise aspects of newness and concentrate on the superficial aspects of the stereotypical poet: I ...

amending my first post: I take extensive notes by hand. If it's a poem, I write out the whole thing by hand; if it's a long chunk of narration, I ...

The repetition (especially of "yeah") made it seem more like a set of song lyrics. One thing I noticed was that the title is listed as "I wanna be a ...

I like this more every time I read it. I think that the single lines of dialogue just visually [and therefore mentally] stretch it out for me. But like I've ...