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Re: Has anybody an all time favourite poem?
I have two! "I Have Been One Acquainted With the Night" by Robert Frost and "Oda a la Alcachofa" by Pablo Neruda ^_^ I like Frost's poem for the sheer ...
Jul 13, 2008 -
Re: Public Speaking (again)
You could talk about lemmings! They're the catch-all topic for almost anything ^_^ And they're sooo cute!
Jul 9, 2008 -
Re: So Close, So Far (Cellophane Wall)
First, there doesn't have to be punctuation at the end of every line. Try reading it aloud like this: "You kiss me [breath] but your lips never touched mine. you ...
Jul 8, 2008 -
Re: Ban The User Above You!
Banned for being a blue frog! ^_^
Jul 8, 2008 -
Re: An ode to sarcasm
The first thing I thought of when I read this through was "get rid of the time structure" meaning, it doesn't matter what ages you or your friends were and ...
Jul 8, 2008 -
Re: Speech In Response to patience's “Abortion”
Ooh, I love differences of opinion voiced in whole essays or other entities of literature. The end result is so much more thought provoking (and thought out) than most other ...
Jul 8, 2008 -
Re: An Ethical way of living
I think that this essay could be helped a great deal by focusing it. There is a lot of talk about "we are" and "we have" but are you trying ...
Jul 8, 2008 -
Re: Fact
I don't know what to make of this. It seems like the kind of thing that's supposed to be poignant and sound all "deep" but it doesn't appear to really ...
Jul 8, 2008 -
Re: Puppy Mills
There's a solid beginning here for a very persuasive essay, but it is sorely in need of organisation. Instead of launching straight into the argument, as you do in the ...
Jul 8, 2008 -
Re: July's Instructor of the Month: JabberHut!
Yay Jabber! Not only is she awesome, but I've seen her critiques around and they're a force to be reckoned with! ^_^ Congratulations!
Jul 8, 2008 -
Re: Actuality v. Reality: An Essay Upon More than Worlds.
For a persuasive essay, I have very little idea of what you're talking about. It isn't that I haven't understood the words you've written, but it just seems to be ...
Jul 8, 2008 -
Re: Radio
This link might help some? It's a Department of Labor overview of the job ^_^ Often times, the relationship advice segments are either in the evenings (since some are a ...
Jul 8, 2008 -
Re: The Expert List
Oh, and I once asked Cal about pirates, so I guess I successfully used it. Thanks to Cal, by the way! Yay! Glad to hear it :D
Jul 8, 2008 -
Re: I am to write one poem a day....
I've been thinking about this one for a few days, and honestly, I quite like it. Even back when you posted it for NaPoWriMo, I thought "squee, I like this ...
Jul 4, 2008 -
Re: Let's see
After the first two lines, I was disappointed. The difference between the first two lines and the rest of the poem is that the first two lines are about something ...
Jul 4, 2008
