Leja

I liked the sparseness of it. It's like sipping lemonade instead of a three course dinner; less, but just as yummy. A smile still licking her lips. I like how ...

I've changed the title! Thanks, xanthan and Clau! "skip the change and close the frame": that's me mixing partner dance terminology with my love for likening everything to the film ...

Shriek: dorm life looks like fun! EDIT (doesn't want to be wrong): you are... back row, middle?

Your math book is missing?

Why must it be?

I saw Becoming Jane. I'm sure many people would find it boring, but I enjoyed it!

Pikara’s white blouse and beret lay flat by her feet. Hidden beneath the clothing was her morble pouch, with two inverted “V” shaped lines as the eyes and a horizontal ...

[s]Lite-shuttled light from above couldn't even penetrate the darkness of our palms at this dirt-dirty crossing with not a nothing in sight. Skip the change and close the frame: no ...

yay for spin-ny hair!

This is too general and going in too many directions for it to be an effective poem. I'd suggest picking one stanza (specifically, one of the middle two) and going ...

:phew: smile! The welcome post is over! no, I don't even want to think about mine ^_^ As to everyone else: their bark is worse than their bite; promise. (:P ...

►Avoir L'espoir - This was going to be my NaNoWriMo Novel but due to impatience, I've already started it. Hoping to write it in a month or so. A very ...

Now, before you get all Freaky Christian warrior on me You know, I just about didn't critique this piece; but then I thought of how closed minded that made me, ...

Jenna! I'm also around to [s]put in my two cents[/s] help [I've gone through Algebra 2 and PreCalc] so feel free to message me if needed.

It's Narnia, no? She has a crown and cool hair, anyway. 8/10