Leja

I think it's a bit too dark. But I like the color ideas! Can you lighten them up any way?

For the record, no she isn't (please don't tell me you thought she was...) (hmm, hope that link'll work...) So how many of you knew the people in the other ...

Mesh, your post made me realize how much I really am looking forward to college ^_^

My school breaks for all the normal holidays for a week (Christmas, Easter) summer for two months, and then we'll get random vacations the rest of the school year XD ...

9/10 I like it alot! (in case you couldn't tell :roll:)

Notes on Latin American immigration for Spanish class >.< But seriously (hehe)? a radio drama and what's turning into a very long rambling. :D

Your capitalization seems inconsistent; similarly, seeming lack of punctuation made it confusing at times. I think consistency would help. Another comment on format; it becomes a bit confusing when it

Thank you, Evangelina ^_^ I feel like it's too short. But I've already made my point? I s'ppose I could add some scenery stuff for effect. Anyone have opinions?

I'm ba-ack; hehe Part Three Immediately the hinge of his jaw constricted at the tart flavor, the skin cracking as he chewed. It was not unlike the jaw-clenching taste of ...

If the book's cover is pink and there are twenty bazillion other installments in technicolour, that is cue for me to run far, far away. I hated reading The Scarlet ...

This seems very heavy compared to the previous two installments. “Albino” is hardly fitting, implying disease, while this bruised paper body is perfection. I'd put the "albino" in italics and ...

“I’m here because you asked me to come here,” The second "here" is unnecessary (and shouldn't he know why she's there anyway?). Okay, so I glanced at a few of ...

The dialogue is wonderful. I like the tone of it, as well as the tone of what's around it. Content seems a bit all over the place to me. Word ...

Love the first line. Having said that, the ~phrase "no alt delete" didn't seem to have much meaning other than to complete the key code; I'm reading it as "no ...

lol; will I ever stop procrastinating?