Leja

hehe, love it, love it!

Oh, I love editing! Writing it the first time is like drawing the lines, editing and rewriting are like colouring them in ^_^

Considering... I like the word change in the second line, but I want to cling to the the following line for at least a little while longer. Thank you for ...

aww, Snoink, why do you have to expose everyone's flaw? :wink:

Punctuation ameliorating ^_^ Though I wonder why you didn't use the same punctuation marker each time, unless this is only the dictionary-defined way of marking an aside.

A very good point, Snoink, that one doesn't have to be depressing to be deep!

I like how the titles set the tone for the following stanza (I had to look some of them up, but that made me appreciate them even more). But at ...

Yep; in the right place! I'd see how concise you can make this. See where you can combine two sentences into one for double the impact. Currently, I think it ...

from above: the branch to the left in the first one is inconsistently reflected/bright. Otherwise, I like it. Eh, unfortunately, I wouldn't have known the second one was a waterfall ...

I usually give him to people as birthday presents (though I need to memorize his code so that I don't have to open up the smiley box every time) :smt117 ...

hey, I'll rejoice to that! man, I think you two have the smilies covered, so I bring... a line or so of exclamation points! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hello, Rachel; I do like your avatar ever so much! Glad to see another person enjoying the joys of writing ^_^ Shyness is fine, but people 'round here are awfully ...

Does anyone read the magazine TIME? I love their cover this week, how they've updated Rosie the Riveter. Time cover: Rosie:

Aaaaaaaaaaaah! I've lived in the Great Melting Pot all my life, I don't usually take a second look when people have, like, purple or red (actually, you know, blood RED) ...

I remember it taking over a month of school before we even had one week without a day off or half-day. My school doesn't specifically holiday for Jewish holidays, but ...