Leja

haha, I love the "free prayer" shirt, though I don't think you could successfully pull it off unless you go to a Catholic school.

It might help if I knew the Japanese between the stanzas, but it all seemed rather obvious to me, like if I read it a few more times, I wouldn't ...

on formatting: you should put poetry titles between quotation marks, I believe, or possibly italicize them. In general, I thought it was well written. The first paragraph was especially nice ...

Nice article, B! This was what I struggled most with when first joined yws.

this is me rambling over to the Other Fiction forum... It seems very [event][event][event], so a tad choppy. If that's what you're going for, cool; if not, consider where you ...

Through my city the cold air rustled As the hard ground beneath it sagged; The thousands were swallowed And I left Prince of Nothing. I liked the rhythm of this ...

I sort of wonder what your intent was? Why did you wrote it? What feeling were you trying to evoke? Hmm, I will certainly be keeping that thought in mind, ...

I see how each stanza connects to another, but not necessarily how they all connect as a whole. But I also kinda like it that way. I found the third ...

Thanks for reading, gadi; if you read up seven or eight posts, you'll find a link to Wikipedia explaining the dancing terminology, though if you're still curious, PM me and ...

Hmm, food for thought at any rate, which I will be sure to snack on.

hmm, Surreal, you're in the way so I can't see your avatar... :lol: I think the lighting's cool 9/10

Whatever's on NPR usually works. And if not, my James Bond record fills in perfectly.

Yep, I probably won't get to meet anyone till college. Same here. But it would be great fun all the same :D

Writing things like "please review" is unnecessary as this is a writing site; it should be assumed that people will look at it anyway. Personally, I find it a turn-off, ...

If you're writing this for information, then you should expand the first two paragraphs. In fact, there isn't really enough information in the whole thing to give anyone an informed ...