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Oh, this looks just lovely, Cal, as always!

-Infatuation: sounds like "inundation", like when someone permeates your life, but it definitely won't be lasting; an intense but passing thing -Adoration: when you love someone for little to no ...

This is lovely, Kit! I like the cleverness and (especially because it's short) the lack of punctuation, and :grr: can't find anything to critique ^_^

This is rather sweet! It is sparse, but I think it works. A few places I was a little confused about tense; "she whispers in my ear" and "I wish ...

7/10 whee! It flies!

4/10... it's kinda cool, but I don't know what it is?

My vote was split between Bartemius and Fred, but Bartemius won out in the end. If I have a question, Bartemius has an answer. Fred just tells me about his ...

I'm sorry but I must say goodbye, and please don't ask why, for it is too painful for me to see the ones I love hurt So please just please ...

feel like I'm at work and being told once again that black shoes do not go with white khakis dude, first of all, black and white go with anything. As ...

7/10 interesting

... swag? (reiterates for emphasis)

Big Brother! *hugs* ... a revolutions? uh oh...

:roll: ha. ha. you're funny, Nate in all seriousness, I found it hilarious ^_^

The "big secret" is the fact that Catharine has lied about the will, and has stuck her dirty hands around so that Samantha cannot have the money. Ah, I see. ...

CATHARINE: Of course she did, but Momma was crazy. I think the "but Momma was crazy" is unnecessary. Later in that bit of dialogue, the part "So the lawyer thinks ...