Leja

Click on the "About The Young Writers Society" link right above the middle column on the front page :) On the default theme that is. Cool!

I didn't like the rhyme scheme, though despite that, I did like the rhythm. I thought the rhymes seemed like rhyming for the sake of rhyming: Your eyes are bland. ...

9/10 pretty!

Physics is just... so beyond words...

I'd like to see where this goes, honestly. I sense romantic interest vibes rolling of Dmitri at Nora and a rather jealous Dee in their future. Nora/Dmitri: hehehe Dee: ... ...

The train and the tree really stand out for me; the leaves on the tree fascinate me, it's like they're unfolding, and it's really cool. And the train, I love ...

There were a lot of commas, which distracted me a bit. I like the placement of words, but unlike the dream/painting described, there don't seem to be many layers here.

streets roiling with a zombie crowds reflection There's something about "roiling". I love the word, but the "roi" in it seems to be a funny shape to make with your ...

*is bouncing off the walls waiting*

The contrast is absolutely gorgeous! The only thing is that the profile of the person on the left is pretty well defined; you can see a nose and lips, but ...

Okay all you people who feel old: I seem to remember finding yws back when it did have the notebook theme but I was too young at the time to ...

Kay: cool yukata! Lupe: what are you talking about? You're so pretty! You too, Evangelina Feel better, write me! Reyu: you call that long hair? :)

True, they were harsh, but they weren't cruel, and that's an important distinction. (doesn't this count as saying something?) I agree! I like receiving harsh critiques because I find them ...

I think because of the rhyme scheme, it sounds rather line-line-line to me rather than *poem* I already feel like my head should be bouncing to the rhythm, but you ...

*poke* It's in English? Very cool, anyways! I like how it's just the eyes of the last guy.