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Re: Pity Girl
There didn't seem to be many layers to this. One of the greatest things about poetry is that you can read it many times and there might be something different ...
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Re: A Faded Memory
Are you standing beside me? Or A million miles away? So here is your body But where Is your soul? In general, I thought the ideas of this first bit ...
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: Red Honey
There are some parts at which I think it could be a little less prosaic and a little more poetic. For example: While the families in rich Florida villas cross ...
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: A Dying Diction
There is alot that's happen ing but I feel like it's all in the background of something that's greater? Like the -ing words are an overlay to something else that's ...
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: Please Welcome Sam and Adam To Big Brother
Congratulations, Sam and Adam !! :D
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: Polygamy
If all parties are equal, and they consent to and understand their relationship, then I really don't stand in a place to stop them. Exactly. I have a problem when ...
Sep 23, 2007 -
Re: The Bible: An Idol?
The Bible has not been turned into an idol because it is not something that is worshiped in and of itself, but it is a means to worship God. In ...
Sep 23, 2007 -
Re: The Quick Reply Box
ooh! Even cooler! I
Sep 23, 2007 -
Re: The Quick Reply Box
There's two of them! *debates which one to use*
Sep 23, 2007 -
Re: Crysi!Zombie
Eep! You have no pupils! Calculus... :roll: great fun.
Sep 23, 2007 -
Re: Breathe Quietly, Moan Softly
I think that the idea is very cool. That said, I think that the places of darker red seem random, and they bleed into other parts of the picture that ...
Sep 23, 2007 -
Re: Violinist
I think that the person is lovely. I don't like the background so much, though. Her right arm, for example, blends too well and seems to disappear, and a similar ...
Sep 23, 2007 -
Re: Folded Page of a Dream
Folded page of a dream in my pocket Mingling in idiot fascinations Useless knowledge— Songs of distress and a plastic love Faceless bands, a neverending game Shallow characters in a ...
Sep 23, 2007 -
Re: What are you reading at the moment?
I'm reading Pride and Prejudice and loving it!
Sep 23, 2007 -
Re: Describing your Characters
I'd rather spend my time fleshing out my characters' personalities because that is what I want the reader to identify with, more so than what a character looks like. Lack ...
Sep 23, 2007
