Leja

Sorry for the confusion; I meant that any phrase with " [insert word here]-proportions" would sound vague to me, but I think it's me, not your poetry, Evangelina. Sorry for ...

My biggest problem was the metaphor used. Breeze and wind is always described everywhere as speaking, or whispering, or singing, or caressing. But think: do you hear the breeze as ...

This seems more of a rant than a well-thought out expression of emotion. While poetic prose and prosaic poetry exists, the block of text in rigid sentence structure puts me ...

Personally, I think it sounds more ramble-y than poetic: I mean, I did take five peoples lives, I did blow up a bus. I did kidnapped a child. [side note: ...

I think that it reads easier now, thanks to the verb tenses. A big improvement because I can absorb the imagery easier (and I do like the imagery alot :D). ...

Kitty: the second picture is actually an organ inside a cathedral. It's cool, the pipes for the organ were on the ceiling, but the keys were at ground level like ...

Of course I take photos; who doesn't? My question is where they are on the spectrum of travel photos/snapshots --> artistic photos?

I adore the way you write, Imp, a lovely mix of action and description. Watch out for sentences like these, though: "With a glance over his shoulder,the slight young man ...

I think that you should crop the first, second, and possibly the last pictures so that there is a focus rather than parts of just empty sky. The ones with ...

All three are gorgeous sunrises, but I particularly liked the first and second ones for the juxtaposition of the trees in relation to the sun.

I think it's a pretty necklace, but as a picture, it doesn't do much other than being a picture of a pretty necklace. I think a different angle might be ...

I think that you could crop parts of it to show exactly what you were looking at when you took the picture. Ex: I might crop out the trees on ...

All in all, I don't see much of a purpose for this poem. My mind glazed over the repeated questions, and once you take those away, not much is happening, ...

I love the way you space the first stanza! It highlights the distaste perfectly! After that, however, I wish there had been more aspects of wordplay or imagery. I very ...

I liked the rhythm in the first stanza, but I was disappointed when it didn't continue. See how in the first stanza, the syllables of each line are 3, 5, ...