Leja

ooh, an audio critique, very cool, Snoink!

Immediate impression: zoh my gosh, I love the title :D And there was a moment paused within the inhale ^ nice! You whispered winter, clutching build the stone-work of the ...

*waves pompoms for L'Avoir Espoir* Good luck with your other writing endeavors ^_^

The season of love Has come again Yet I still find myself Trapped inside my frozen heart This seems to be the general idea of your poem so I don't ...

I am insanely curious: you're past the 1666 mark; who did you give the review to?

Myth: in the dark, it casts these super-cool shadows from the streetlamps and from buildings nearby. It'd be creepy if no one were around, but there are always people out ...

So much sand imagery is spent dealing with the idea of time. I think it would be interesting if you picked something else, something uncommon: maybe blades of grass, or ...

To expand on Meep's idea, it might be cool if you first folded the origami, then wrote your poem on it, maybe giving each stanza its own wing, head, neck, ...

There are alot of things being dealt with here. In the first stanza alone, there are thoughts of calm, loneliness, maybe a bit of nostalgia, but what do any of ...

This is written in such a lovely style. I like it alot. I think that the stanzas could be better grouped, so that it's not so much two lines, then ...

This poem confuses me to no end because the imagery and references seem all over the place, in my opinion. I think they could be a little more focused? You ...

There is nothing special happening here; it appears only as a description of a violin, and I think that's all it was intended to be. While some poetry can hold ...

There's something about it, like a dead man's bony fingers on his coffin lid, that slips through me, ^ lovely image! :D I didn't like how it was followed by ...

Poems written for people are difficult for the author to be objective about. Here, we have a long list of reassurances, that the narrator will always be there presumably for ...

There are alot of things happen -ing in the first stanza, but I can't see where it's going. The repetition in the third stanza annoyed me after a few lines ...