Leja

Thanks all! *scurries to library to search*

Apple

I have characters, and they have names. Both wonderful things :D The whole novel sounds interesting too!

Short and sweet! I like. Since it is so short, you should make an effort to make everything as tight as possible. For example, properly space the fifth line and ...

Not much more than vague generalities seem to be happening here. I think you could make everything a bit tighter, spread ideas out through the whole poem, and choose your ...

To answer Sam's question [First, a disclaimer. I am aware that I'm about to be horribly stereotypical, blunt, and gender biased. Now I acknowledge that I'm doing this, so let's ...

pretty tattoo!

I've read this! It was lovely. Especially the ending. Eh, I don't know how much I can say without giving things away, except that I'd recommend it! ^_^ -Amelia

I think that Ms. Carlyle is just about the most fun character ever. I want to say that Nick appears to change personalities with every scene, but I suppose in ...

Ah, I see. Something else I noticed: I don't think he got dressed before going to breakfast? That seems a tad odd, even for this family :wink: -Amelia

ooh, I love this show! I'm watching the new season at the same time as catching up with season one, so you're right cadmium, there is a noticeable difference, but ...

"Jeffrey!" Mother hisses. She does this every time anyone mentions her and Father are married. It's like some kind of revolting secret she has to keep well-hidden and without mention. ...

In all, it seems too... rigid. Like you took a few sentences and line-broke them: esp. dialogue tags after the quote. I mean, it's done, but here it just seems ...

As much as I love ranting about the opposite gender, I am more curious as to the books they read. I still want to know: can someone find me a ...

[s]Nora: "Well, I kind of already maybe I should answer a different question?" Dmitri: "If the opportunity presented itself, I wouldn't reject it" Rosie: "Duh! I'm always left behind"[/s] Describe ...