Leja

I am participating in NaNo for the first time this year (crazy with college apps) and I'm kind of nervous about it. Same here, to all of the above :D ...

It's long, it's got a'lots of V's in it; what could be better ^_^ 8/10

I guess so. -Bao When I see them -Connie They're very out of the loop -Charlie Well, they get along fine with me; it's getting along with each other that's ...

The bridge falling in again -Connie Yeah right, like I have nightmares -Bao [is lying] Eh, the normal stuff... I suppose -Charlie Of Bao and Charlie exploding the oven again ...

Unfortunately, most of my writing each day is taken up by papers for school (1-3 hrs). After that, I usually spend time plotting (1-2 hrs), and unfortunately, haven't written any ...

I'd just like to comment and say that reading about men bathing has never been awkward for me, unless it was written to be, er, you know - awkward. Wink ...

Sounds like a political thriller to me. Something to do with the CIA and high-action foreign drama. Objects in Mirror

Connie: It's so cold in this part of the country! Bao: suck it up; it's colder where my grandparents live. Charlie: uh, I'm... normal? Mrs. Mills: I'm always cold, but ...

Chapter numbers? ridiculously confusing. All the zeros in the title here kinda look like potatoes... I nod and notice the holes in his arm, probably from an IV. I've tried ...

I got a kick out of "optimistic Armin" and the Compensation list :D

Connie: The one on Bao's shoulder's hot stuff! Eh, wait... don't tell him I said that... Bao [hasn't heard Connie]: let's not talk about tattoos. Charlie: Well, I'm supposed to ...

Formerly AmeliaOliver, now just plain 'ole Amelia ^_^

Soooo who's read it? :D Good book, I must say. In all, it's a hilarious satire of life as it is in this era [think: youtube generation, number of hits ...

Fun punctuation ^_^ Not sure if it's completely necessary, but fun anywho. Been reading a bit of e.e. cummings recently? That's great for the novelty, but be warned, that novelty's ...

It's been a while since I read the first draft, but it looks like it's looking up :D There are, however, two major things I've noticed. (1) It seems very ...