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Re: April Derivatives
I had to write this for Spanish class today, and I hope to at least make a good effort the rest of the month. Obviously, I'm not a native Spanish ...
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: Why?
write: it's like a jigsaw puzzle that rockets out in more directions than an Android Market commercial.
Mar 16, 2011 -
Re: NaNo Playlists
Here's a link to mine on Grooveshark: It's mostly country music and Glee covers. I don't have the most original taste in music xD
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: Who's ready for NaNoWriMo?
Whoo! Get excited!
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: Is the English Language sexist? (Essay)
Even though the following are criticisms, I do think that you made a good argument overall =) This essay apologizes too much for itself. If you're going to make a ...
Sep 29, 2010 -
Re: Dear YWS
I love the "blueberry chat room" line!
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: what do you listen to while writing?
C-SPAN ^_^
Aug 28, 2010 -
Re: What are you listening to right now?
Fiction Family =)
Aug 27, 2010 -
Re: past tense vs. present tense
I've written a lot of scripts lately, so present tense is becoming kind of automatic. I'm not so sure that I like that fact though, haha. For me, past tense ...
Jun 12, 2010 -
Re: User Profiles Have Just Been Updated
Everything is so very sleek and very well done! :D I guess I'm just not a fan of the social network direction though; I really like the forum setup! I ...
Jun 12, 2010 -
Re: Dust Dawn
I really like the opening two lines. After that, I feel like I'm reading a ton of exposition but getting nowhere near any kind of point (until the line "Silence, ...
Jun 7, 2010 -
Re: See
The cuts in my paper thin, paper skin hold messages- This is a great way to begin! You've got a great sense of pacing here. I also like how you ...
Jun 7, 2010 -
Re: Lost Eyes
This poem relies on the idea that there is something (presumably, the same soul that is named at the end) that can physically be seen by literally looking past a ...
Jun 7, 2010 -
Re: The Ultraviolet Catastrophe -- Summer Poetry 2010
Dear Kylan. I have been away from the site for a while, and as such, have not read any of your poetry during that time. Lo and behold, I come ...
Jun 7, 2010 -
Re: Tears of Blood
This poem is very general. It focuses on a vague group of people throughout a vague timeframe. The point seems to be that I ultimately empathize with the subjects, but ...
Jun 6, 2010
