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Re: the moon is my own personal necco wafer
Haha, love the concept. Eating the moon... what else is there even to write about? :D I don't know much about poetry in general, but I love the imagery you ...
Aug 31, 2016 -
Re: Dr. Carnival - the loony sequel
AHAHAHAHAHAHA... The "Sunny Smiles Mental Hospital" was great. Kudos for great humor. As far as grammar goes, there were absolutely no flaws as far as I could tell. You hit ...
Aug 27, 2016 -
Re: The Colour of a Street Light
As far as grammar is concerned, you did an amazing job. This story is easy to read and it flows really well. The concept is really interesting, to me the ...
Aug 27, 2016