Leeloo

The deck of the Smokescreen groaned and sighed with age and exhaustion. The wood was salt-puckered and beaten from the wind, creaking underfoot as the four crossed. The wind punched ...

Oh man, this was really, really good. Your characters are increibly well developed. I loved the relationships between Carrie and Jensen, Jensen and Kai, and Jensen and Manny. The whole ...

This is a descriptive, suspenseful piece of writing and I love suspense, and a writer setting the mood, so I really enjoyed this! There were a few mistakes but others ...