Leeloo

The deck of the Smokescreen groaned and sighed with age and exhaustion. The wood was salt-puckered and beaten from the wind, creaking underfoot as the four crossed. The wind punched ...

Oh man, this was really, really good. Your characters are increibly well developed. I loved the relationships between Carrie and Jensen, Jensen and Kai, and Jensen and Manny. The whole ...

I liked it :D Good creation of atmosphere! A few grammar mistakes as mentioned previously but otherwise, pretty tight! Great ending to, it's sudden impact was a really great end ...

Hey! I have been working on this for ages, then suddenly and violently fell out with it! I think i've seen it too many times, I now truly hate it. ...

I'm not sure whether it is truly Sci-fi, but it's set in the future! Jared reared his head up, giving a cursory sniff. His hair seemed to have exploded on ...

-Explanation: everyone at school's in 'their own little world', right? So I decided to take this literally. Everyone's got their own words to dive into when they're lost in thought ...

This is the very beginning of a novel I've started. I don't know if this really is going to be the start actually, I may change it and put something ...

Hey guys, thanks for the welcome!! I've got so many people to ask for help now, thanks! :D I can't wait to get my work seriously critiqued, although thats a ...

Hehehee, that was amazing! very funny, and I love the whole firting with death thing. And the fac that Catelin wants to be depressd! It'd be great to see it ...

This is a descriptive, suspenseful piece of writing and I love suspense, and a writer setting the mood, so I really enjoyed this! There were a few mistakes but others ...

I really liked this. It was interesting and I liked the way it was written, particularly at the beginning, in a 'talking-to-someone' style. Sometimes when you get that talkative-style, it's ...

Um, hello! I'm new here on this site, and I thought I'd introduce myself! I usually write stories, but I have times where I write poems, and I've always strived ...