Leahweird

I just have to say, I like how the pyro got a phoenix feather XD That is all

Thank you for the review. I'm glad this still gets some attention/ t was an interesting exercise in free writing. If you're interested, my work Black Penndragon is actually an ...

Thank you for the review! I've never tried a piece like this, so you're comments were very helpful. I must say, I'm very glad that it was clear that Danny ...

Is this meant to be a repost of chapter 5? Because I'm confused.

I know I tend to love all of your poetry, but I esspeicially liked this one. You can almost feel the sense of elation just by reading the words.

I think you misspelled "buick" and "sigh" in the last paragraph before the break. Otherwise I have no comments, except to point out your awesomeness.

Argh! Again with the missing words. It's an affliction. Thank you very much for catching those. As for Fleurine, I think this scene shows off the huge difference between the ...

Oh it's awesome that he's a necromancer. I just meant that he deals with some of the same things (thirst that relys on the death of others, immortality) in an ...

Thank you all for your wonderful comments. Espiecially those who took the time to point out my errors. You have no idea how much I apprieciate having people read my ...

Umbrim reminds me of the oldschool, pre-romanticized vampires. He's got that edge to him.I loved the discussion with his "fan".

Okay, I take back my comments about Rima being closer to the forefront. This was definitely the origins of a heroine. What a beautiful scene!

Hmmm. She's definetly not coming across as particualrly matronly. I can see how that would be a problem though. Unfirtunetly I have no suggestions.

Hee hee. When I read about guys like Cheyne, I find myself waiting for the heroine to give him a good smack. I enjoyed letting Marguerite actually do it.

I'm so glad you are both enjoying this! It means so much to me. I like to think I pour my heart into all the things I write, but I'm ...

I've actually been told to tone down my use of disctinctive prose. I tend to use complicated words, and sometimes that stops people from knowing what I mean. Also, if ...