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LayfonHowle

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Wolf, Year of the Dog- Chapter 1

    I'd love that! I see now, with Sheep...Get workin' :)

    Dec 20, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Wolf, Year of the Dog- Chapter 1

    First Paragraph - almost see through -I'd put almost transperant, it flows better in my opinion. more taller appearance - just taller, no need for more. fourth - built like ...

    Dec 20, 2012


I was promis'd on a time, To have a reason for my rhyme: From that time unto this season, I receiv'd nor rhyme nor reason.
— Edmund Spenser