LawsonJ

Thats for all the reviews everyone! I was just wondering though how many people spotted my subtle word trick about 'those inverted to the Devil' - 999 being the inversion ...

Thanks for the reviews! I may revise the story. And no, I don't write poetry.

Fires long to consume. They rage and ravage, burning whatever encounters their path, transforming it into ash and embers and only stopping when there is nothing left to raze. But ...

Left foot. Right foot. Left foot. He kept running. As his leg pushed through the air, his mind could wander. Right foot. Why did I want to do this? Left ...

Its a good story, but I feel that the bond between human and horse isn't developed enough. The flying bit is excellent, but I think that more could be added. ...

Its not bad at all, but I feel that your trying to describe something very dramatic, powerful and fast very slowly. For example, "A sudden force threw me off my ...

The earth had not stopped shaking for a week. You couldn’t hear or see the guns firing, but by Heaven you could see the result. Over 1500 artillery pieces bringing ...