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LaurynMitchell

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Cliche

    Thank you, everyone, for your comments! I really appreciate them. :) In terms of the rhyme scheme, I really just wanted it to have a strong rhythm, regardless of whether ...

    Nov 4, 2010
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Brothers-in-Arms

    Thanks for the feedback! I proofread this several times, and I still didn't catch the last two until you pointed them out :P I'm glad you liked it!

    Aug 17, 2010


When she transformed into a butterfly, the caterpillars spoke not of her beauty, but of her weirdness. They wanted her to change back into what she always had been. But she had wings.
— Dean Jackson