LaurynGamble

you guys seem adorable!

Thank you so much!

Thank you. I re-read this and realized I posted an older draft, I have one that is much more polished. I was a little over-zealous to get something up and ...

This is much beyond your years! the imagery and description is incredible. There are a couple of words that need to be replaced, "majorly" for example. but other than that ...

Very sweet! The rhyming is on point and it is very cute. I think that there should be a little explanation on why she is your tomato, but perhaps the ...

This is beautifully written! The description is very vivid and really takes me away. The only suggestion I have is to make it a little more clear who you are ...