Laurenlovely

Thank you so much, BlueAfrica! Smells are important indeed, I really need to start focusing on them I was my first try but I'll try to do better. If you ...

Thank you so much for the reply Boluk! I'm glad you enjoyed the story :D Also, I just put out part 2 yesterday so it is quite new, I hope ...

Thank MJ, sorry about it being fast-paced, whenever I start writing my mind starts rushing through everything... I'm sorry... But I will also continue editing it so don't worry. :D ...

Thank you so much, Rosette! Your reviews always make me so happy

Thank you so much!! :D :D

Thank you, Rosette~ :D

did a bit more editing because of misspellings (etc.) but other than that I feel it's better. Hurrah! :D

Thank you so much Justlittleoleme2! And I was based in the literary spotlight as well, I'm so happy :D

Update: I added where they are located, toned down Oreos past, and did a bit more description!! Hope you like it better, and feel free to edit my new and ...

Thank you so so much rosette! Don't worry I'll add the setting they are in in no time! I described things a bit more so readers could understand a bit ...

Thanks for the review PrincessInk! I tried to add more details, and I'll have to find a way to tell where they are located because I feel I did a ...

Thank you so much MJ! I edited the story so if you would like you can come review it again. Sorry that it is so short, I'll make part 2 ...

Thank you so much Justlittleoleme2! Some of the things you wrote down, such as describing the food, I didn't write down because I thought it would be better to describe ...