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Hey there Tigersprite! Thanks so much for entering the First Chapter Contest! Here's your thanks-for-entering review! They wanted me to come and stay with them, for I was a great ...

Hey TabbyGirl! Thanks so much for entering the First Chapter Contest! Here's your thanks-for-entering review! Why? Well, it’s sort of complicated… This is probably more of a personal preference th

Hey baywolf! Thanks so much for entering the First Chapter Contest! Here's a thanks-for-entering review! Not that I cared too much what they said. At least not much. The repeated ...

Hey there Snoink! This was awesome! I love the blood type idea with the vampires, I've done a storybook around that whole concept and it was really cool. Anyway, I ...

Hey there Kladi! I've read over the first part of this chapter already, so this will be a review over the whole chapter. :) I really enjoyed reading this! It ...

Hey Kafka! Chapter three must have slipped under my radar, well here I am to review again! He has eyes the colors of cubes. Was it said what color the ...

Hey Kafka, back for another review! What I saw inside the cubes...I could not see what was inside. (I condensed this whole paragraph down, just so you know what I'm ...

Hey there Kafka! This was seriously awesome, in a mind boggling sort of way. The tone fit perfectly, and the use of complex vocab was impressive (are you really thirteen? ...

Yes! You've posted! Let's get through a few nitpicks first ;) Step away from the creepy dude, my mind urged me. It would be much more effective, I think, to ...

Alright, finally around again for a review. ;) This chapter was a little stiff at first, but it easily warmed back up into the flow of your typical writing, which ...

Hey Rachel! This prologue is definitely more on track than the last one, and it is so much easier to understand. Though, I do wonder. What is the connection between ...

Hey RachelW! Oh, the prologue. One bit of fiction that is really hard to write really well. In this review I'm going to concentrate on the piece as a whole ...

Cannibalism? xD I like this poem! It's cute, but a little dark as well. I don't know, I just seem to like that for some reason. Haha! The rhyme scheme ...

Hey Hannah! This was...strange, but a good strange. If that makes any sense, haha. Anyways, I enjoyed it, more as I read on than in the beginning. The beginning was ...

Hey Whisperer! Sorry I have been such a failure at keeping up with reviews! I’ve been so busy and YWS has fallen to the wayside. But now I’m here with ...