Lauren2010

Interesting so far. I like how the main character narrates and how the two other characters were developed well. I do agree that Cassie is majorly underdeveloped for being the ...

Haha that was great. I love the books and original story line of them but i can appreciate poking fun at it all. To be able to write a parody ...

Ive been working on cutting things down. At least in amount posted in each post, sorry my first was so long! Read and Review please! =) It is a normal ...

Nice poem! A lot of people have already pointed things out so I wont say the same things. Although i do agree that the last line looses the flow of ...

ooo nice. haha, i really like it. It's pretty intense which is good that you can write that way without it sounding cheesy. You just have to make sure you ...

I do not have the smallest room in my house, my brother does =P TPBM: sang "Don't Stop Believing" in the past week. "just a small town girl...living in a ...

Okay so, I would love to read this, but.. it is very very long. Like meadowlark above said, it scares people off. maybe try splitting it into 2 or 3 ...

Woah. That's so creepy. But in a good way! It's a different type of story, which is good. Variety is the spice of life they say. I didn't understand exactly ...

"Long ago, before the land we know today came to be, there were ten countries on this land. These ten countries all had their own governments, their own races." the ...

Wow that took a turn I wasn't expecting. Good! I read the prolgue and was a little afraid of the cliche romance novel thing myself. (me and my best friend ...

Aside from a few grammar and spelling errors (which have already been pointed out so i wont repeat them) this is pretty good. I really like the names you have. ...

Just a little side note...pardon my grammar and spelling errors. i have an edited version but i posted the unedited by accident. I'm stuck using word pad on my computer ...

First, this is good. I haven't read any other parts of this story or the pre-edited version of this chapter but it's a good beginning in general. There weren't many ...

Ooo I'm hooked =) good job. I agree with muffy above that you do a really good job with the attention to detail. And Brayden's mysteriousness was revealed a little ...

Hey, I'm new to this whole place so hello to everyone out there =) This is a story i've been working on. It's fantasy and takes place in a world ...