Lauren2010

I waiting patiently for the Kori girl to talk. But she just stared at her food. I gave her a little nudge. "How about if I go first? Then you ...

"Woah" I said in awe. I never really guessed how different outcasts could be. "I'm Kylie." I introduced with a sweeping bow after I regained my compsure. "Now if you ...

Well I guess I'm still technically considered 'new'. I've been on for like 2 or 3 weeks but i kind of skipped over the introducing myself. I'm Lauren =). And ...

"That was seriously cool" I said in awe after the girl reappeared. "I've been looking for more outcasts to aquaint myself with. I've been alone for so long and I'm ...

Okay, so I know ive posted this like twice already. But I made some major changes and rewrote a lot so Im kind of starting over. Let me know how ...

"Woah calm down." I said. I knew I looked like one of those government officials after the outcasts. I had to change quickly once the cops came and I managed ...

Kylie. I strolled through the forest calmly. I didn't have anything to worry about. I wasn't myself, or rather who I was supposed to be, so they wouldn't find me. ...

Name: Kylie Gender: Female Age: 16 Special ability: shape shifter. Typically can just change her human appearance to any she desires. Hasn't been able to change to much other than ...

Hmm maybe Lindy and James could be together. I'm not really decided on that yet, so we'll just have to see how the story plays out =)

Hmmm we're lacking male characters, since we are allowed 3 i think ill bring another one in =) Name: James Wright Age: 18 Grade: 12 Appearance: Short spiky black hair, ...

Hey, here I am again =). So this was good too. It kept me interested and its still keeping me guessing a little so i want more. Thats good, you ...

Hmmm nice preface. It pulls you into the story without giving much away. It hooks you and makes you want more. Good job! I really like your use of detail. ...

I'll join =) but maybe its the whole rated R sex scenes allowed thats scaring people off? It can be fun without all that sort of stuff. Name: Alexis Grange, ...

Sounds sweet. You should run with it. Write it well and you'll get people to read it. People love that weird out of the ordinary type thing. At least I ...

NAME: Serenity Maddison AGE: 17 SEX: Female BACKGROUND: Was being flown to France from the U.S. for a foreign exchange program. Serenity speaks fluent French and is an excellent cook. ...