Lauren2010

I liked it until the clones....yeah. It would be better without the whole political overthrow thing as it has been done before, in dodgy sci-fi ways. If you wish to ...

Okay, so I had this story I wrote last year. I liked it pretty well, but now it needs to be redrafted and reworked (plotline doesn't quite work for me ...

Echoing the many other writers here, it just takes time. I'm on the second rewrite of a story of mine that i absolutely love to death. the first rewrite was ...

Are we going to keep going with this or what? If we start over lets please do it soon.

Maeve We sat by the newly restarted fire for a long time. I hoped Luis and Kate were okay, they should be finding us better since we built the fire ...

Woah, we've got 2 white tigers here. Is that allowed or should one of us change? we could always make it something crazy like the two are twins or something ...

Name (tasteful names please): Whitney Tyler Age(11-21): 17 DNA shared with: white tiger Gender: female Appearance: shorter at around 5'3. Usually wears tight bold colored shirts and dark jeans. Almost

James I grew tired of waiting for Alexis and it was dangerous to go without the signal fire so I just went and found some wood anyways. To my suprise ...

Another nightmare haunted my sleep. This one was different. The sky was dark, an evil lightless night. I was sitting high on a demonic black horse. My long black robes ...

“I am so proud of you Natura.” My mother told me again. It’s all she had been telling me all day. I glanced around my room at the bags filled ...

Thanks for the review! A little note on the dreams: they are pretty crucial to stuff that will happen later, and they are better explain as a little more than ...

Maeve James and Chris finally made it back with Star and Comet, but kind of freaked out when they found Alexis had gone into the fire. "Welcome to camp." I ...

James Comet seemed quite angry over being found. "Chill out man, it was just a question." I said. "Yes, but obviously we are not okay." He stood, showing large gashes ...

Alexis Maeve and I had sat in pretty much silence for the longest time. We didn't talk until we noticed the fire was almost out. "Crap." I said, "Do we ...

James We sat down on a log to rest. "Hey man," I said after a while, "Where are we anyways?" I looked around, we were surounded by trees that looked ...