Lauren

Hello! Thanks for the PM. The opening paragraph totally drew me in. It has a dreaminess to it - I like that. Only, like budding writer, in parts, I got ...

A good read, had me entertained, so thank you. A problem I found was that your dialogue could be a bit 'off'. You were trying to make to sound authentic ...

Fantastic! Steady, promising writing throughout - kept me right on the edge of my seat. I could feel it all, sense it all, and that's a good thing, especially as ...

I don't read many weird books. I think it is probably 'Mirror, Mirror' by Gregory Maguire (he wrote 'Wicked'). It was a take on Snow White, for adults, and was ...

Oh my God, that was beautiful, saves. Utterly enchanting. I was wary at first, of you cutting chunks of time, but then I saw what it was leading up to. ...

I must say I read it because of the title. ^-^ Saw no Jane Austen, still hold hopes, but am guessing her appearance won't be literal. Apart from that, yeah, ...

Hmm, well, seems a nice idea. Only... within the last few years, don't you think this sort of thing has been done a bit too much? It's getting, well, repetitive. ...

Hi. I really, really liked this, Tadatori. I think that might be because I, like many others, have been in similar situations (not with the happy ending, however). It could ...

I liked this, although the method chosen to portray it was somewhat... unconventional. Actually, though, I thought it was a rather clever idea, focusing on something quite sad but coupling ...

It was a bright summer’s day, friendly, warm and happy; most unlike the students who were walking along, bracing themselves for the start of another year and the sweaty, cramped ...

I liked it but, you know, there was something almost dream-like about it. It was as though it wasn't happening - there was nothing materialistic; it was even whimsical. I ...

I read it a couple of years ago and I called it my favourite book for awhile. It was a good idea, even if the life-after-death thing has been done ...

I wrote a crit awhile ago but it got wiped. So this'll be short. I think it has a lot of potential as a novel, believe it or not - ...

Hmm, well, if this is set in the witch trials, don't you think it's a bit like The Crucible? There are similarities anyway. Steer clear! However, my claim could be ...

I'm with you, chocoholic. The main thing that made me despise it was that there were no speech marks and hardly any commas - frustrating. WHY, OH WHY?? I think ...