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The name that jumps out at me is Isabel. Or any of its spelling variations.

Would you be so kind? :) It's Other Fiction. Pwetty pwease?

Don't worry, tori, I think jok101's just got a bit of a chip on his shoulder. I'm British, and I was not offended. Some people look for insult when there ...

Two critiques already! :D mhmmcolleenx0 - Thanks for the critique! I see that mostly you have picked up on my tendency to make my sentences too long. I'll bear that ...

Hi, Dem :D I feel so cheeky asking, but would you review this for me? It's Other Fiction. I will return the favour.

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My mum went to a boarding school in England, so I know a few things. I can see you are American, so there is something about the English schooling system ...

Hi, Explosive_Pen :) Just a quick review here. I watched as the rain blurried you mean 'blurred', right? the image outside the window, distorting the trees and sky. The clouds ...

Hi sparrowrules ! Lovely to meet you, I'm Lauren. I'm glad this is only a first draft, for two reasons: 1) It is just glittering with potential and loveliness. 2) ...

Eyes and mouth. I look for sincerity. Most of all, I notice their eyes to detect any ridicule/mockery. :)

I saw a program about this once... about all the ingredients cheap food has that the public would rather not know. Cheap sausages often contain eyelashes, snout, ligaments, tendons & ...

Hi Rosey Unicorn! Nice to meet you at last xD [My Overall Impressions] I'm so glad this was not cliche-ridden. It was, thankfully, original and very cute. There needs to ...

I've done the deed x] I don't see the problem--there are only so many times you can read 'Fantastic - gold star!'. Rating gives the reader a good idea of ...

Other than published novelist, a historian. I'd love to manage a museum (geeky I know) or perhaps make discoveries (although that would involve archeology). If not, I wouldn't mind being ...

XxxDo, this is lovely contemplative fiction. I sense it is based on a real person? I can think of nothing erring in the body of text itself. The subject, the ...