Lauren

Not much detail and the arm is a bit dis-proportioned. Apart from that, you did the joints well; I can see the frame nicely. Now, this might not make much ...

I don't think developing a taste for the classics has much to do with it. I like a lot of the classics (namely those of Thomas Hardy and the Brontes) ...

Hmm, well, if this is set in the witch trials, don't you think it's a bit like The Crucible? There are similarities anyway. Steer clear! However, my claim could be ...

in my experience, if I'm told to read a book, it's never as good as one that I choose to read. That's the same for me. Except the classics, for ...

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I'm with you, chocoholic. The main thing that made me despise it was that there were no speech marks and hardly any commas - frustrating. WHY, OH WHY?? I think ...

A hauntingly beautiful story, Lilith! It's like one of the short stories from the 'Sun, Moon and Stars' book I had years ago. I'd love it if you had illustrated ...

Thanks Kyte. Will correct those errors. clobgrabby - I see what you mean. It was intentional, however, to show the Friedrich in a humane light. Though probably edging into taboo, ...

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Yeah, I guess the mother's death was not explained fully enough. The father was meant to have got some kind of fever (a man used to England will often not ...

Awh, you're too modest! It was wonderfully good. Wording = great. Lay-out = great. Idea = great. Imagery = perfect. One thing, though... you should consider the length of your ...

Hi. I never comment on art, but I had to for this. Mr Rochester = perfection. Well, him or Captain Wentworth. Anyway, I'll refrain from sharing my fantasies and take ...

Hi there. The main thing I liked about this piece was the voice of the narrator. She sounded smart and contained and very aware of her surroundings and what they ...

Thanks, Luvzi12, that was a super-considerate crit. :D I see I've made a horrendous amount of typos - and yet I want to be a proof-reader when I'm older. Hmmph. ...

Hi. This was interesting. Too much would have been long-winded, so I think you did the right amount. The ending was a slight anticlimax, if I'm honest - I wanted ...