Lauren

I'm a complete classics-nerd, so it's drama for me. Except the best ones are probably mini-series. I also like thrillers, but not silly horror-thrillers - they've gotta be clever. I ...

Hello! Thanks for the PM. The opening paragraph totally drew me in. It has a dreaminess to it - I like that. Only, like budding writer, in parts, I got ...

Wondrous, Thea. Marvelous! Too big, though --- maybe you should get your dad to help with that. Do put that blue one up, though!

My sister and I had numerous furbies. Our parents hated them! They were supposed to gradually "learn" our language too. I remember one of them used to mimick the phone ...

Ooh, I just read 'Keeping Faith' ... you know what, it might just be my new favourite. Involves a lot of religious symbolism, kinda cutting edge. Stigmata!

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A good read, had me entertained, so thank you. A problem I found was that your dialogue could be a bit 'off'. You were trying to make to sound authentic ...

He was looking at me like he knew me; like one of those boys at school who the girls loved. Like one of those boys who'd ping my bra-strap and ...

Sounds like fantasy to me, and I'm not so clued up on those. Uhm, I'm getting some sort of bookishness from it, like it will be intellectual, maybe like a ...

The pig lets out noxious fumes that terrify mankind and suffocate bananas! Poop goes the weasel! Your butt burns all week! END! Never! Don't forget flying squirrel monkeys and blueberry ...

Fantastic! Steady, promising writing throughout - kept me right on the edge of my seat. I could feel it all, sense it all, and that's a good thing, especially as ...

I don't read many weird books. I think it is probably 'Mirror, Mirror' by Gregory Maguire (he wrote 'Wicked'). It was a take on Snow White, for adults, and was ...

I think Nai must be a human trafficker. Please don't steal my identity! Ha, not that it's worth much. 1) Starting time: 19:56 2) Full Name: I couldn't possibly say. ...

Oh my God, that was beautiful, saves. Utterly enchanting. I was wary at first, of you cutting chunks of time, but then I saw what it was leading up to. ...

I must say I read it because of the title. ^-^ Saw no Jane Austen, still hold hopes, but am guessing her appearance won't be literal. Apart from that, yeah, ...