Lauren

Very good! Hi by the way. I was a bit sceptical at first - I see many of these 'in the eyes of a stalker/serial killer/creep' things, but I think ...

Can see what you mean. But if you mean the cheek, it's meant to look flattened, as its against the ground. It was meant to be a spaniel of some ...

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I think the dragon itself is great. The scales, the eyes! But I have an issue with the sea, which I really don't think you put much effort into. The ...

Great Expectations. It was just a long description, then a few snipets of dialogue, then more description, then more dialogue, ect. I couldn't even recognize a climax in the story. ...

I too was smacked on the behind when I was naughty, but only after I'd had several warnings and failed to listen. Sometimes it's a matter of children seeing how ...

Nuclear sounds likely. There are a lot of people out there willing to do these things. I'm not very clued up on it all, but am I totally off the ...

The Other Boleyn Girl by Philippa Gregory. I'm serious. Worst thing I've ever read. I got it for Christmas. I've got that. It wasn't great but it was all right. ...

That makes no sense at all, unless you purposely look for something to connect. Precisely. But, whaddayaknow, this is how they analyse it: '... Consistent with the interpretation, 'the great ...

Okay, so to back up my point about these prophetic dates passing to no avail, I had a snoop in my Nostradamus book (ya, I'm that much of a geek). ...

I'm sorry, but there have been plenty of these 'prophecies' throughout time and most of them have not happened. How many times has the world been told of a certain ...

There are a lot of basically unheard-of authors that somehow managed to fall under my radar as a twelve-year-old-ish. One was Anne Cassidy. At one time, I had all her ...

Thanks all for the critiques. Ashleylee - That's really sweet of you. I'm not yet sure if there will be a follow-up, but if there is, I'll be sure to ...

But what about that natural rage - have you ever had the overwhelming desire to *hurt* someone? Do you think that, if you were not connected to society, watched no ...

Hello! Nice to meet, I'm Lauren. I just thought I'd add that, seeing as you're writing a novel, there is an excellent group you can join: 'The Novelists'. To get ...