Lauren

Greetings, fellow YWSer :wink: What I usually do is pick up on things as I read through and note them down, then do a little summary at the end. Here ...

This was good, if a little strange :) I think you wrote it pretty immaculately considering that it was intended to be short and quick on impact. I think grammar ...

Ooh, this looks like fun. Half Broken Things: Lonely old woman makes family of strangers and lives delusional life with them in manor house.

Hurt

You're lucky, Tatra, in that you seem to be okay with these... disturbances. My friend Beth sees these bright white lights (you know like when you set magnesium alight) and ...

Hi :) Just saw this (even though it's been here a while) and thought it looked interesting, so here goes... *sidles off for a read* “Must the Sun I know ...

Rain Medieval or Victorian

English! Intelligence or beauty?

I think most writers aspire to be published, and to say otherwise would be a lie. However, that isn't the be all and end all of it for me. I ...

Lauren, Look. I'm going to be honest. I can't just be expected to linger in some kind of limbo while you try and overcome your writer's block with reading. I ...

(I think this must belong to one of my parents. It was just lying around.) from Swing hammer swing! by Jeff Torrington: With the ball of her thumb she wiped ...

For me it's Charlotte. I love both Jane Eyre and Villette and couldn't finish Wuthering Heights---I mean, it was good, yeah, but a bit silly. Plus I hated Heathcliff :roll:. ...

Yay, more historical fiction! :D The board has been so slooow . Anyway, hi, nice to meet you. I'll just jump straight in... Brisk footsteps followed Georgiana into the forest. ...

Hi :) This looks promising! Let me see... Why did he send me here? Frustration and uncertainty filled my every bone. This is a good intro. I was intrigued. Is ...

Hello again :) Posting so soon? Night couldn’t have come sooner; I didn’t plan to stop though ach, kind of felt like you jumped straight in there, maybe explain, though ...