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^^ I have that book, wisemann. Couldn't get into it though :( The Night Following: Woman kills woman in hit and run; with guilt tormenting her, she repents by replacing ...

Probably not a good idea to bump your own thread. I know how it is though. Be patient is all ;) Kade Carlise was an intelligent young man born into ...

Hi :) So basically what I'll do is comment as I read and then do a little summary at the end. Okey-doke? Sometimes the emptiness of it hurt my eyes. ...

Very well written, KnightlyAngel09 -- I can't fault it, of course, in vocabulary! I think it succeeds in what it was intended for, and humour was evident. The writer seemed ...

Just reread this book and came back to here. I'm cringing at what I wrote. Came back to the book with a less critical and, I hope, more matured, eye. ...

You're so kind, Kirsten! You always make me smile :D I'm glad you liked it and thanks for reviewing. Will return the favour as soon as possible.

"Can you shut the curtains?" to my little sister. You can see I'm like the worst sister you could have in the world in that A) I care about curtains ...

Hi, and welcome to the site 8) I think I'll quote sections and then either rewrite them in a way I think might sound better or just hint if something ...

Thank you, the four of you, for reading this and reviewing. I'm glad you liked it, though I'm wondering if I didn't make it clear enough that his mother is ...

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This is funny, because I was making a list not dissimilar to this in Humanities, when I should have been doing GCSE revision ^_^ Yayza. Northern Germany --- I want ...

I would have to say at least one Austen, or you'll never know true satire. I also think Half of a Yellow Sun by Chimamanda Ngozi Adichie, as it's full ...

Hi :D I could not feel my legs anymore, I think, to draw us in, you should the end sentence here, and have the rest as a new sentence. I ...

Ach, you're all so pretty. There goes my personal all-writers-are-unattractive-and-it's-intelligence-that-counts-so-it-doesn't-matter pet talk down the drain. :(

The Outcast --- Lewis' adored mother dies tragically and his father shows him no affection, which leads to his downfall, showing that love is a vital ingredient to a good ...