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Lauren

  • General Fiction Novels Re: Prologue with nothing to follow

    This user has been banned and her works removed from YWS.

    Jan 5, 2010
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Brother

    This user has been banned and her works removed from YWS.

    Jun 13, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]

    Demeter, you were such a cute kid xD Have been inspired, for better or worse, to post a couple from my own younger days. ~~ Yeah, that was taken just ...

    Jun 3, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Journal of All Things Little [1]

    Aw, thanks you three, you've really made my day. Seriously. I've been stressing about exams and then I came on here and whoa, so much niceness(sp?). Virtual hugs to the ...

    Jun 2, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Journal of All Things Little [1]

    This user has been banned and her works removed from YWS.

    Jun 1, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Evi is the Member of the Month for June 2009

    Awh, Evi, you've come so far! I'm in total awe x] Congrats! xx

    Jun 1, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]

    June, you look so classy and sophisticated, and pretty .

    May 31, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Love Hurts!

    Hi, borntoshop! :) I'll happily be your reviewer today. Authors note: Where it says ‘Billy Loves Rosa Caitlin Kate Peyton Elle.’ Its ment to have crosses through all the names ...

    May 30, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]

    Dem - You like Scotland, huh? And you have damn pretty eyes x] Actawesome - You're clearly one of those effortlessly cool guys, aren't you? Holly - You're the sweetest ...

    May 29, 2009
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Deleted

    Good afternoon yourself, EllyMelly (well, actually it's evening now, here at least). I haven't seen you around before, so hi x] I'll comment as I read, nit-picking mostly, and then ...

    May 29, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: First Paragraph Feedback

    Hmm, it was a bit lacklustre. I mean, it would be fine somewhere within the story, good even, because it says a lot about the wife. But it probably wouldn't ...

    May 29, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Garden of Thornless Roses

    Hello, Coffee_and_Karma. I must say, the title drew me in instantly. I hope the story lives up to it && I'm sure it will. Right, I'll comment as I read. ...

    May 28, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: An Absence of Rose

    Evi, this is amazing! It had me on tenterhooks, wanting to know what had happened, any everything--the little details, the sensations--added to the tension, the wanting to know what had ...

    May 28, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Rosie.

    Hi, silver :) I'll comment as I read, alrighty? Walking along the freeway is a tad demoralizing. Maybe impact would be better if you scrapped 'a tad'? Hundreds of cars ...

    May 27, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Celebrity Crushes? *giggle giggle*

    Louis Theroux!

    May 25, 2009


Blessed is the man who, having nothing to say, abstains from giving us wordy evidence of the fact.
— George Eliot