Laura_Jane

well i liked it

overall that was really good..but i didn't really like the ending as it didn't fit in with the rest of the poem..does that make sense?

Night. As the sky becomes darker, and with the rest of the world asleep, I can escape into my own mystical fantasy. I am all alone, in a dimly lit ...

Seriously i thought that was really very well written, and it clearly came from the heart. I really liked the style and the structure of the poem aswell!

Well done! That made me laugh a lot, and thats normally how i feel when i write!

That was amazing! It nearly made me cry was so expressive, and thoughtful also the rhyming was really good , and i LOVED the ending

My dreams are desired with every moment in which I am awake. Possessive and powerful, my most craved and yearnful fantasy is forever present in my mind, controlling my body ...

I thought that was excellent..i loved how Albus seemed to calm about draco's son, and i thought the description of rose was really thoughful:), Are you going to continue with ...