LauraMae

I really like this, it's very compelling and I found myself reading on because the narrative raises many questions. That is naturally a positive, as it keeps reader's attention, which ...

This is real decent :) I like how you start and end on the same thing, black and white, because often poetry deviates from its origin and ends up someplace ...

Hey guys, thanks for all your advice! I think I will split it into paragraphs, I've never written flash fiction before so I don't really know all the techniques. :) ...

Fate dragged a long, blackened talon through the throbbing organ in James’ chest. It spat back at him, droplets of blood splattering onto his grinning face. Under Fate’s hand, James ...

Does anyone know how I could do this? I just discovered OneNote by accident, and I like the look of it, because it's all in sections with pages etc. However, ...

Yeah I am. I wish I wasn't though, makes me want to rip my hair out sometimes it's so frustrating. It's about a man who suffers from depression. He's spent ...

Check your Portfolio with "My Portfolio", and then click on the option to edit your portfolio. From there, you should find a button or tab that lets you choose to ...

From what you guys have said, I'm taking it that if I remove the work then it won't matter. The reason I joined this site was because I saw the ...

I posted a ~1000 word excerpt of one of my WIPs last night. Another member suggested I post in the novel forum, which I did a little research on (how ...

This is the first draft of a scene from my WIP. I'm not going to say what the novel is about, because I feel it will kill the tension. Please ...

When describing the way a character speaks, I always get stuck on how to describe how they are speaking. I don't want to focus too much on it, just as ...

I agree somewhat with what Veritas and hopeispeace said, because they are right to an extent. However, I did quite like this actually. As was written in the poem, Tariq ...

Oh no please don't play Bieber :smt095

Wow hey guys :) thanks for the warm welcome :smt003 Gonna answer your questions now... - I come from London - It's 35c here at the moment :smt012 I'm praying ...

Hey, I thought I'd announce my presence... (drum roll) :mrgreen: Go easy on me please :) And is anyone from the UK in here?