LauraMae

Thanks Nate, that was quick! :)

Sorry to bring back a dead thread, but I was wondering whether anyone else had any problems getting on WriterFeed? I have an account there and I have work saved ...

Thanks for your review Stella, I am very grateful :) I have to say, I'm glad you asked questions, because at least that means you want to know the answers ...

Hello, This is something I conjured up today, and it acts as a prologue to a novel I am currently planning, and is a first draft + a quick once-over ...

This is very interesting, although I agree with Noelle that it reads more like a prologue than Chapter One, as a. it reads like a history of this town/the world ...

I don't even care what you say, this is amazing. So ssh, Daniel. I wandered (Great, makes you think lonely, desolate etc.) into the cold breeze like a soldier The ...

Um, wow. That was really captivating. A lot happened in such a short period, I'm thinking maybe you could lengthen it a little, because everything happens so fast I was ...

I have to disagree with you perdido, as I the 'soft' words he used and the leaf metaphor were used for a reason. Harsh sounds and words would ruin the ...

Thank you Priceless :) I really am shocked by the response this simple piece has received. I am really grateful, thanks people! :D

Thanks for all the replies guys, it means a lot! :)

I clicked on this story purely because the title attracted me. My Dad died a couple years ago and I thought I'd check this out, because I know what it ...

Yes! Cantankerous old man, I love it :) I love the wryness of this piece, delicately humorous and written very well. Just a couple of pointers on this one, there ...

Oh, alright, thank you. :)

I have to say I am incredibly confused by this lol. I get the gist of it, but the lack of punctuation makes it confusing as to where to take ...

Hi I've been on this site for a while but I still don't understand the points system. So far I've done only three reviews and posted two things (yes I ...