LauraM

I understood dead tree at dusk, double negatives, two granny smiths, seventy cent It was interesting... x

I thought that was right good! It's not like you'd expect a zombie poem to be like, not scary but cheery and fun. It's like a kids poem we all ...

Grounded. Everyday I'm in my room, Everyday I hit the on snooze, Everyday I go to school, Everyday I don't know what to do. I love love love this! I ...

It was a sweet short poem, but I didn't really understand what it was about. The second and the third line didn't really have much rhythm and were kind of ...

That was so lovely, you put so much emotion into it and made it beautiful. I loved the idea of the comparison to the robot, made you understand how misplaced ...

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I chose 1st person as I like to concentrate on thoughts and feelings.

Wow! You're all so welcoming here! More than other forums. My story's fantasy/adventure. What's your favourite genre to read/write? fantasy and real life sort of think. If you went to ...

I would definitly read it. It grabs my attention from the first line. I'd really really want to find out what happens. 10/10 _____________________________________________________ I wasn't that upset.

I really really love the last two lines. They're so thoughtful. I love the way this is written. - Clever idea. You said I would be fine. You are. Don't ...

I thought it was really relly good. I loved your use of adjectives. Just from the scent of fresh paint of it you could tell it was highly expensive. I ...

It looks a bit like a cat to me. I love the colour of the eyes. It's just beautiful. I also agree with ThorneRose. I don't really do drawings paintings, ...

My name's Laura and I'm 13 years old! I currently writing a story. It's not very long at the minute as I've only done just under 1,000 words. I've started ...