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  • Art & Photography
    Re: Penguin

    First I have to say, oh my God, you're avatar is amazing. About your drawing, I think it's adorable and fun to look at.

    Apr 17, 2011

  • Art & Photography
    Re: New World

    Hey girl! Yay for more art submissions. I really like this piece, mostly because I can see that you are improving. Painting an entire background is really tough to do ...

    Apr 15, 2011

  • Art & Photography
    Re: Linearts and Sketches

    I decided my first submission would be this lineart that I have been working on for a mini-portfolio. It isn't very clean and I'm not super happy with it. I ...

    Apr 13, 2011

  • General Fiction Short Stories
    Re: My Aborted Child

    This piece was interesting, but it wasn't spectacular. You were brave to write about something as controversial as abortion, but I don't think you gave it all the emotion it ...

    Apr 9, 2011

  • General Fiction Short Stories
    Re: When a flower withers

    Hello Ashley, corrections in red . And she was the sunshine of my morning A cloud of love floating by she looked up to the heaven one day And heard ...

    Apr 6, 2011

  • General Fiction Short Stories
    Re: The Decision Process

    Hey there roostangarar, I hope you're having a great day! Corrections in red , brackets if I have any comments. "Look guys", said I, "We've got a distinct lack of ...

    Mar 25, 2011

  • Official Polls
    Re: Genre Battle

    I really like historical fiction, but I read everything. Except sports biographies :P

    Mar 23, 2011

  • Art & Photography
    Re: Why Hide the Eye

    Woo, more art! I have to say right now that this is really good. I can't find anything to critique really, sorry! I can see you have been practicing. What ...

    Feb 6, 2011

  • General Fiction Novels
    Re: Dreams Tell Lies - Chapter One

    Hey IcyFlame. Welcome to YWS, I hope you have fun here :). Corrections in red ! Chapter One: The End The fog had lifted by the time I reached the ...

    Jan 21, 2011

  • Fantasy Novels
    Re: Shadow Deal

    You're welcome!

    Jan 20, 2011

  • Art & Photography
    Re: It's A Girl

    Hey BlackSheep! This drawing is pretty good. What I think you did best is the shading and coloring the hair, both are pretty well done. My critiques for you are ...

    Jan 19, 2011

  • Fantasy Novels
    Re: Shadow Deal

    Hey Fallen, corrections in red ! Chapter 1 Prolouge Ever since the accident I haven't had a good night sleep. I have been hunted by the memories of my family ...

    Jan 19, 2011


  • Iceprincess, this piece truly moved me. I am so glad you wrote this, I enjoyed it so much. I usually don't like to read about homosexual relationships but I really ...

    Jan 18, 2011

  • General Fiction Novels
    Re: The real chapter one

    Hey BeachRose! Corrections in red ! I’m no special girl, I’m shy and many people in my grade don’t know what to think of me. Sigh , some would say ...

    Jan 16, 2011


  • I use both the computer and notebooks. When I feel like I need to just get something out, I use paper, but if I'm being thorough I use this free ...

    Jan 15, 2011


No one is perfect; not even your reflection.
— Chalkboard Words