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Re: Happiness
There are many things that stand out about this poem, the total lack of stanzas irritates but the message at the end has the same climaxing feeling as a song ...
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hello and greetings. I'm LastPaladin of what you decide and by Paladin I'm going by DnD type ones. The kind, generous, selfless and protective kinds. I'm an avid photographer going ...
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: Let me go home
I'm weak, you did this to me, you took me away. Return me. I don't want to fall I don't want to drown I don't want to feel alone I ...
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: The Kind I Can't Live Without
Hello Forestqueen, I'll be your reviewer. I'm unsure what to say, sadly this comes off contrived and I'm afraid that's putting it lightly. It very pretentious. And really when your ...
Mar 29, 2010 -
Re: Mist
MIST Hanging over valleys Clinging to the trees. Hiding this great land From viewers Like you and me. A blanket blowing in the wind Rising and falling. A white sea ...
Mar 28, 2010
