LastPaladin

April 3rd: Curious Eye Hidden mirages viewed by a lens, of tragedy of love, of broken hearts. Shutters never lie. In a moment it's taken, the event captured by and ...

Thank you Hannah now today. 2nd April: Bittersweet Covenant Fate has decreed with a sardonic grin, that my decisions in life meaning nothing. I can't avoid the future, present and ...

I'm taking part :). This oughta be fun!

Name: Andera Michaels Age: 28 Description of appearance: Pale brown eyes, Matted ginger hair, he wears the uniform of the Royal Guard, his armour rusted and stiff. His cloak is ...

Greetings Christian, I'm LastPaladin and I see some great imagery, and some beautiful metaphors. But this poem falls apart, because of two reasons it comes across as preachy and it's ...

I'm entering NaPo, here's my first entry. The title is questionable but had to put some sort of title. You can choose a title if you wish. April 1st: The ...

Greetings I'm LastPaladin. I'll be honest right away I loved this. I'm a harsh reviewer but to be honest I can't find anything to complain about. The rhythm is beautiful ...

Hello, I'm LastPaladin and I'll be your reviewer. This is cute, but I'm afraid with me cute doesn't cut it. The line lengths switch about too much for one thing ...

Hello, I'll be your reviewer. I liked this poem took me reading it twice to catch the theme. How it was actually about love. Although I like subtly but that ...

Hello, I'll be your reviewer. My main problem with this is it's navel gazing and right away I'm bored, not because it's bad but because you just 'pushed' us out ...

Greetings, I'll be your reviewer. Now this poem did nothing for me, you ignore common practice of grammar and totally go for the jaded cliches littering many 'emo' type poems. ...

Hello, I'm going to be your reviewer for today. Now let me be clear, this poem bothers me, it seems slightly juvenile in sense, you practically hit us on the ...

Hello, I'll be your reviewer. I be honest straight off this seems more like a song, and way you repeat some parts but slightly change theme seems more like a ...

Hello and never put yourself down when showing a poem, it sends wrong message, firstly it makes us think 'why bother on helping' since person seems so sure it's not ...

This came about after talking to my lesbian friend, and I had weird idea that what if a story was written good enough to do with this theme. The Stanzas ...